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Grammar For Grownups
A manual for people who have to use language in the real world.

Grammar for Grownups Quiz #76

Wimpy Writing

Does your writing come across as passive or aggressive, blah or full of action, weak or powerful? Rewrite the following sentences that bother you.

1. The weather outside is nice today.

2. A couple of weeks ago, it snowed, alot.

3. My neighbor shoveled snow, knocked icicles off of trees, and opened a path between mine and his garage.

4. Tired of working, the yard looked pretty all dressed in white.

5. Pleased with the results, nothing would do except a full cup of nice hot coffee.

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